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Ponder what you see and saw,
what was, what is, what will be.
Frozen thoughts begin to thaw,
and lost words return to me.

In the distance is an obstacle,
which once fought, will overcome.
The first of many steps may fold,
yet another may leave you numb.

Fear not the failure of one,
mistakes will squander before you.
Your battle is not yet won,
happiness could be yours, too.

So gather yourself and be prepared,
for new troubles will come knocking.
Hurt feelings shall be shared,
to find that others can be caring.
©2004-2009 ~2Le
:icon2le:

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For a picture competition by poetrycafe
It can be found here [link]
Picture is taken by mrk

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:iconrinatovna:
Great! makes you think.
:iconinvisibleseven:
i love this. i feel this way alot lately. excelent work. +fav for me.

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-i dont know anything anymore-
:icon2le:
I'm glad my poetry is reaching out to people :D and thanks for the :+fav:

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:devlivingpoetsociet: ~ LPSworkshop ~suture ~poetrehab ~poetrycafe ~lost-souls
:iconkoal:
I think that photo is really good, the poems fits it nicely.

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I really like living
:iconangeljunkie:
that's an interesting match with the poem and photo. the poem itself is really well-written and thought-provoking. nice work.

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"You've a good heart," she told him. "Sometimes that's enough to see you safe wherever you go." Then she shook her head. "But mostly, it's not."
:iconecho-si:
Working off of people's photos is a great way to invoke the muse & I'm glad you're exploring that path. Keep playing with structure (don't restrict yourself & don't be afraid to go crazy), and also try to consider how imagery and metaphor can express your ideas for you.

:)

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do your part. love your mother. :earth:

:peace:

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